LIFE
How boring is life
with sorrow at night,
Its darkness waiting
to rise up with pride
But patience is over
to start up all over,
My life is full of sorrow & no more,
But from a long darkness,
with life full of care
& have no space to go,
but a day will come,
that will empty all hollowness
& I would be searching for LOVE!
Sakshi…
So sweet!
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Thanks for the compliment…..it was my first trial of writting poem!
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you need to write more, then 🙂
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Yes….I’ll
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I have nominated you for the Liebster Award.
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Thanks ma’am
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Nice one, keep writing. 🙂
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Thanks!!
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Instead of feeling Bored and thinking of Life as a Failure, Let’s Be Grateful for what we have in our Life, which we are taking for granted, those things we have, which someone does not have and are praying to God for the things you have.
Read my poem “What If”.
Maybe you should write, putting yourself in shoes of another less fortunate person than you.
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yes..I respect your views & firmly believe that at the end of the day something very good & satisfying is going to happen…..By the way this was my first try on poems so would love more suggestion.
Thanks
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Be Brave Girl.
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Thanks!
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